Lovely and cute...anyway too obvious... you must make it more elliptical... create AN IMAGE ....avoid commonplaces.... as the bells and smiles which are so usual when a baby arrives... invlove the reader in a guessing game!!!!Do another one!!!!
Lovely and cute...anyway too obvious... you must make it more elliptical... create AN IMAGE ....avoid commonplaces.... as the bells and smiles which are so usual when a baby arrives... invlove the reader in a guessing game!!!!Do another one!!!!
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